Wednesday, May 7, 2008

A guide to a HAPPY LIFE



People often only care about themselves. They don´t mind when crossing the street, if there is the blind.
On the bus, they don´t live the seat to pregnant woman o disabled people.
It will be better if we can HELP OTHERS more frecuently,because we will feel proud of our actions , and also we will make other people happy.




I had chosen an image, becuase this picture in particulary has a very big significance.

This a photo taken during a competition in New Zeland, the objective is to cross the river with the help of other people.

1 comment:

Jimena Cas said...

Very good Flor! Now think of a new TOPIC SENTENCE, which really expresses how this idea would improve the quality of your life. The supporting sentences are OK. Now you can print the paragraph and hand it in so that I can help you with some language/spelling mistakes. Well done!!