I think that havingf riends is very importanat, because friends are all do you need to have for have a good time. They are in all of yours situation, sad or happy, is importantto have someone who understands you. Also having friends is funny and beautifull, because with them, you can play a lot laugh. My opinion are that if you have friends you are going to bre happy.
Brenda Kopyto 2ºG
Monday, May 5, 2008
A guide to a happy life
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I totally agree Brenda! Very nice passage. Try to think of one short and clear TOPIC SENTENCE, and then the examples or opinions. Correct it some time this week, please. Excellent work!!
Well done Flor, now you can print the paragraph and hand it in so that I can help you with some language/spelling mistakes.
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