Wednesday, May 7, 2008

A guide to a happy life

Topic: exercise

A lot of people are unhappy of the way their body looks, this probably happens because most of them don’t exercise as much as they should. For example they wouldn’t go to a swimming pool, because they don’t want anyone to see their body. Sometimes this happens because people don’t have enough time to do exercise, but the truth is that they only have to do 20 minutes a day! There are fun exercises to do for example jogging or riding bicycles. You can also go to the gym or do fun sports, such as volleyball, football, tennis, etcetera.
Doing exercise is really fun, plus it helps you to be more self-confident, and live a little bit happier.

2 comments:

Jimena Cas said...

Excellent work Nico! I totally agree with you, but it's so difficult to follow such simple rules!
Now you can think of ONE TOPIC SENTENCE which shows how this idea can improve the quality of your life. The supporting ideas are OK.
Then, print the paragraph and hand it in so that I can help you with some language/spelling mistakes. Well done!!

Nicolás Eid 2K said...
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