Thursday, May 15, 2008

A Guide to a Happy Life, by Brian G.

I think that something important to have a happy life is practicing sports, like soccer, basketball, volleyball, or a lot more. The sports make you to have fun and it's healthy because it is an exercise and the scientist say that doing exercise is good for your body. Another reason to practise sports is that if you play in a soccer team, for example, you earn more friends, and that's very important in a person's life, have friends. But on the other hand, when people competive in a sport, they discuss and almost always it finishes wrong, we can say.
The important thing is that you don't need to discuss in a sport competition, like a soccer match, you have fun, and that's important.

HAVE A HAPPY LIFE!!

1 comment:

Jimena Cas said...

Excellent work Brian! I totally agree with you.
Now you can print the paragraph and hand it in so that I can help you with some language mistakes. Remember to express the main idea in ONE TOPIC SENTENCE and the examples and opinions in other supporting sentences.
Well done!!