Monday, May 12, 2008

A Guide To A Happy Life: Sleeping Well

To have a happy life is important to laugh have fun sleep well and care yourself and others. Laughing is always something important to have a good life, imagine if you never laugh that would be a bad life. Sleeping well is also a very important thing beacuse if you dont sleep well you will be tired all day long and probably in a bad mood, and if you dont sleep well often maybe you can become ill. Care yourself is important beacuse is you dont care yourself like eating junk food, doing incredibly dangerous things, etc you will probably ill and that is a really bad way to spend you life and sometimes can even kill you. Obviusly you can also help others to be alright like spending time with them, help them with something.

2 comments:

Jimena Cas said...

Excellent work gastón! I totally agree with you.
Now you can print the paragraph and hand it in so that I can help you with some language/spelling mistakes. Remember to express the main idea in ONE TOPIC SENTENCE and the examples and opinions in other supporting sentences.
Well done!!

Gaston Avi said...

But if i print it and you correct it how im going to correct it?

Gaston