Watch what you eat,don't eat too much junk food!
If you do that you'll probably be in overweight,and thats not good.
You should also do much exercise,going for a walk half an hour a day can help very much.Don't wait to be thirsty to drink water.
You should also know where does the food you eat come from,if it's from a dirty place,you shouldn't eat it.
If you do that you'll probably be in overweight,and thats not good.
You should also do much exercise,going for a walk half an hour a day can help very much.Don't wait to be thirsty to drink water.
You should also know where does the food you eat come from,if it's from a dirty place,you shouldn't eat it.
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Excellent work Uriel! I totally agree with you. Now you can print the paragraph and hand it in so that I can help you with some language mistakes. Remember to express the main idea in ONE TOPIC SENTENCE and the examples and opinions in other supporting sentences. Well done!!
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